Adelina - Commission

commission for
her lovely character Adelina

here is the first chapter of her novel:
     Slide; bang; tap; and rattle. And again rumble of the footsteps, finally finishing with a clap.        "Well done, girls. Let's do the previous one," he cooed over his students, for he was delighted with the day's achievements. But don't be fooled. He was not that congenial most of the time, when for example Emily could not stretch well or Caroline could not do the splits. Don't judge them. They had a tough time at home, or at their part-time jobs. And when one is emotionally stressed, it very much affects the way you move, the way you dance. But wait… don't judge him eithe